So… I’m usually pretty good with sort of confusing story lines but this one is just weirdly sequenced and the MC is … I don’t know… hard to want to keep reading but hopefully it gets better ?
The only thing I’m sorta struggling with in this story is the mc. He’s very…. “dead fish” in emotion and expression, like there’s zero emotion on his face and zero expression in his movement.
I am quite confused 😵💫
– it is hard to establish what do they feel towards each other really. Top looks passionate but detached and even neglectful. MC looks like he is used to suppress his emotions completely, also it looks like he is struggling with voicing his needs and he just hurts himself instead of communicating and asking.
– they do not really have a “marriage” really. The wedding was anticlimactic. Their house looks cold and distant, grey and empty. They have different rooms, and it looks like those large, cold rooms is a symbol of their marriage altogether. They lead two separate lives. MC left his previous life for his husband, and now he has literally nothing. Top never tells him anything and constantly leaves him in the dark.
– Also, it is not clear if the top is faithful and what does HE think about their marriage. We know MC’s inner feelings, but we never got his husband perspective.
– Also, it looks like there are hints of MC turning into omega?
Amandakat
So… I’m usually pretty good with sort of confusing story lines but this one is just weirdly sequenced and the MC is … I don’t know… hard to want to keep reading but hopefully it gets better ?
FeralxXx
The only thing I’m sorta struggling with in this story is the mc. He’s very…. “dead fish” in emotion and expression, like there’s zero emotion on his face and zero expression in his movement.
solargraph_
I am quite confused 😵💫
– it is hard to establish what do they feel towards each other really. Top looks passionate but detached and even neglectful. MC looks like he is used to suppress his emotions completely, also it looks like he is struggling with voicing his needs and he just hurts himself instead of communicating and asking.
– they do not really have a “marriage” really. The wedding was anticlimactic. Their house looks cold and distant, grey and empty. They have different rooms, and it looks like those large, cold rooms is a symbol of their marriage altogether. They lead two separate lives. MC left his previous life for his husband, and now he has literally nothing. Top never tells him anything and constantly leaves him in the dark.
– Also, it is not clear if the top is faithful and what does HE think about their marriage. We know MC’s inner feelings, but we never got his husband perspective.
– Also, it looks like there are hints of MC turning into omega?