Sorry, but could you please speed up the plot a little or improve the situation?
At this point, the entire story feels like nothing more than a psychopath repeatedly assaulting a defenseless boy. If you plan to add romance later, you’re likely to lose most of your readers before you ever get there.
So far, all we’ve seen is abuse, assault, and deeply disturbing behavior. There’s been no meaningful development to make readers believe in the relationship or become emotionally invested in it.
Exactly, and why is he so angry, what gives him the right? He can’t be more angry than the bottom after all he went through, and after all the raping that happened until now it’s beyond forgiving it would just be sick, the story is not deep enough, when it started with him loosing his sister I thought it would be a revenge story but it’s just lost every meaning.
None of you deserve of Ryu-Jin ..
If he can run away
He better do that
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All of you is sick pervert bastard..
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Please made Ryu-Jin grow stronger and then kill them all..
ErikaPetrell
like I don’t want to read this anymore, this will stay here good bye
Gdsfhjkkk
Sorry, but could you please speed up the plot a little or improve the situation?
At this point, the entire story feels like nothing more than a psychopath repeatedly assaulting a defenseless boy. If you plan to add romance later, you’re likely to lose most of your readers before you ever get there.
So far, all we’ve seen is abuse, assault, and deeply disturbing behavior. There’s been no meaningful development to make readers believe in the relationship or become emotionally invested in it.
VAYA
Exactly, and why is he so angry, what gives him the right? He can’t be more angry than the bottom after all he went through, and after all the raping that happened until now it’s beyond forgiving it would just be sick, the story is not deep enough, when it started with him loosing his sister I thought it would be a revenge story but it’s just lost every meaning.
Mangareader03
It’s turning into Stockholm syndrome
RavenSchofield
None of you deserve of Ryu-Jin ..
If he can run away
He better do that
.
All of you is sick pervert bastard..
.
Please made Ryu-Jin grow stronger and then kill them all..